NeonProject's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[LOSER (Original Mix)]

This is amazing!

Everything is really well done, well mastered and well arranged.

My only recommendation would be to add a few more vocal samples, there are some quieter opportunities where a female vocal would fit really well.

RasmusiBoy responds:

Thanks for your comment and suggestions! :)

[Hurricane of Love]

Really nice!

The lyrics are really good and the vocal melodies are done really well. The piano in this is also really beautiful!

The drums and the synth don't seem to match the other instruments, think they could do with a bit of further EQ and mastering.

[RAC2012-India PRVW]

Brilliant!

This is just... this song should do so well!

I can't wait to see the full version with vocals and full mastering!

AKACCMIOF responds:

Ahhh thanks! :D Super glad you like it so far! Got vox on it today, just doing some final mastering :)

Thanks for the RAC competition, I've been dying for a chance to challenge myself and get my name out like this :D

[Party Rock Anthem - b4 remix]

Interesting

Your synths sound beautiful, but they're a little loud and bassy. That's where the kick drum should be really.
Also your drums sound like they need a lot of attention mixing wise, especially ther hats and claps, they sound like nothing been done with them really.

It sounds promising, and with some work, this will sound excellent!

b4ttle responds:

Thank you. :D

And yeah, the drums do need work. This is the weird thing, is that the drums are completely different in this than what they are in FL. Its starting to get annoying. >.<

I dont do much work with the drums on the first mix, so I usually go back and fix them up later.

And once again. thank you soo much! :D

[xKore - Morning Coffee (NG)]

Ooooooh! :3

I love this, the buildup is amazing and the strings... egad. D:

I just feel that the rides are a bit too loud, especially the tappy one.
I love the metallic quality to the riff, it stands this track apart from the regular trance tracks (seriously).

The song overall makes me feel happy inside. The drum section at 2:00 could do with some experimentation in panning too.... but, wow. I love this.
I think I'll click that download button, I'll click it right now!

[[S_Rock] Electronics To Death]

Awesome beats

Love the piano, it sounds so appropriate for the style.

The drum kit is a bit too loud and perhaps needs a little bit of EQ to take down the piercing high end. The Piano, at the star also needs some EQ to take away some of the rumbley effect which seems to eat everything else.
Oh god, that high end on the piano sounds chilling.

Just a few minor adjustments and this will be perfect.

S-Rock responds:

I'm not one to disagree but This is EQ'ed.
I appreciate the review but it sucks that my speakers produce something different in sound quality.

[Super F (Italodance!)]

Awesome!

I really love your choice of melodies and use of key in this track, it's like a soothing italodance piece, unfortunately I can't make my mind up whether or not it works for this style. :/

Musicality: Beautiful choice of riffs and melodies, the layout of the track is much like a classical piece, with a main major melody, then a minor breakdown section.

Instrumentation: The instruments are nice, but they feel a bit basic, some of the leads need layering and the bass needs an assisting lower synth part to bulk it up. Some EQing can also help with the overally layer of the piece.

Style: I seems that this track can't make it's mind up... Dance or soothing euphoria? If you go for Euphoria some of the instruments need a bit more delay and wider reverbs, along with more use of stereo field. If you go for dance, the instruments need bulking up and the percussion needs a bit of compressions (especially the kickdrum)

With a bit of improvement, this track can easily become a huge hit, it just needs a few more tweaks. I hope you take thi criticism well, I do like the track and I'd like to see you improve. :3

Nice work!

Airprogressive responds:

Thanks for you review Neon!

Yeah, I take criticism well (It's the only way to improve) xD. All can be better, and this track is not an exception xD

Thanks again!